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Looking For A Story

Post by Hepzibah » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:46 pm

Hi folks!

Well, this usually doesn't happen to me, but I can't locate a story I read on LTBSA. Not sure when I read it... could be a few years old. Here's what I recall:

There was a guy... possibly working in a department store. A female undercover official went there, looking for missing persons. In particular, there was a missing celebrity cold case from years ago. Some woman at this store (I think) was using a wand (?) that when she touched one end of it to a person, it froze them into place and sapped life energy from them that made her younger. Eventually the guy and the female official wind up at this woman's lair and find several victims and end up freezing the culprit.

I really liked this story. And help would be greatly appreciated!

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Re: Looking For A Story

Post by zapped! » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:55 pm

That story would most likely be, "Compulsion" by Dmuk and DL. In fact; I was just re-reading it for probably the hundreth time a few weeks ago, and it still hasn't gotten old!

http://www.many-realms.net/LTBSA/storie ... sion_1.htm
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Re: Looking For A Story

Post by Hepzibah » Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:58 pm

That's it!! Thanks VERY much!!

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Re: Looking For A Story

Post by zapped! » Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:01 pm

You bet. :D I wouldn't mind seeing an additional chapter for that one someday . . .
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Re: Looking For A Story - continued?

Post by dmuk » Thu Jun 18, 2009 10:00 pm

Well, it's on my mind, too. I've been thinking of the many interesting directions for the plot to take. Any ideas??

Also, in a bit of a tease for the next update, there's a new segment (much much more than just a chapter) in the DL story "Lost Merchandise" (with some editing by yours truly) that is in the works too.

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Re: Looking For A Story

Post by zapped! » Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:41 pm

:D . . . Ah, as?? que yo vea. Gracias mucho sir!
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