I've just posted a new story, Infinite Voyage, loosely based on a couple of online animations that I found. It's quite short at just 1300 words so it won't take up too much of your time.
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New story based on online gifs
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New story based on online gifs
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Neat story for a short-short; works well with the pictures too!
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Thanks!dmuk wrote:Neat story for a short-short; works well with the pictures too!
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I like the character's ongoing struggle between pleasure and her fear of the unknown. It has a very helpless and claustrophobic feel to it, as the experience is told from an internal point of view, (which is the hardest way to write, in my opinion). An entirely original piece that's as well thought out as it is written.
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Thanks, guys. I appreciate your comments. PS I've nearly finished another story that's a bit longer, so stay tuned.
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Another great story Leem! Thank you : )
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OK, the NEW new story is now finished! It's a bit longer at 4800ish words, and I've indulged my literary pretensions a bit.
Anyway, it's called Adrift. See what you think.
http://p-synd.com/adrift.htm
Anyway, it's called Adrift. See what you think.
http://p-synd.com/adrift.htm
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